People Power - Nicky : Grade Commentary
Nicky has demonstrated thorough knowledge and understanding of the role of Germaine Greer in Women’s Liberation. A well-structured response has been provided, but it would have benefited from further planning. Relevant evidence and significant detail have been used to support the argument and conclusion, however the links between Germaine Greer and the subsequent role of women and their status in society need to be more explicit. This work sample demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at grade B standard at the end of Stage 5.
Grade B
The student has a thorough knowledge and understanding of the content and a high level of competence in the processes and skills. In addition, the student is able to apply this knowledge and these skills to most situations.
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